Bit of a rush job this week. Unfortunately we weren't able to get the joke in our heads onto the digital canvas. Given the chance to do this strip again we would've inserted an extra panel whenever Wolverine's vicim changes in order to indicate that he is waking up each time from a dream. This would have aided our comedic pacing in the joke delivery as well as made the transitions a bit less harsh.
Sarah also noted that it's pretty tough to adopt Patrick Stewart to her cartooning style. He's certainly a distinctive looking guy, but it's a subtle combination of features that make up his signature look.
Weeks like this help remind me of how much we have to learn in making comics and telling jokes. We'll do our best to learn from these mistakes and endeavor to make next week's comic better.
- Sozo
